First chapter critique

Service Description

Exactly as it sounds! We'll review your first chapter and add inline notes, plus send you a half page review of what we loved and where we think you can improve to really knock the socks off readers, agents and editors. PLEASE NOTE: This service has a TWO-DAY TURNAROUND, which means you will get your feedback within two days of the day you booked (you'll usually get it sooner, but this is just to ensure we can do the job around writing deadlines or unforeseen events).